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A Night To Remember

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     Two friends, roommates to be exact, were frantically rummaging through their clothes. "Come on! There has to be something!" said the first, a brunette named Felicia. "I'm looking, nothing is right for tonight!" cried the second, her name being Jane. You see, these girls were planning to go to a certain rave that night, a big one at the most popular club in town. They had hopes of meeting boys there so of course they were obsessing over what to wear, they were practically OCD on the subject. "Maybe we should've just bought new outfits..." said Jane, the more quiet of the two girls, though when she showed it, she was quite eccentric. "No, I'm positive we have something, let me look" said Felicia the more dynamic of the two (for now). Jane and Felicia continued to search for a proper outfit for the rave, still not finding anything that suited their needs. They looked for over thirty minutes until they finally made a breakthrough. Jane found an outfit consisting of a denim jacket and jeans shorts while Felicia went with a gray top with a skirt. Satisfied with their clothing the girls continued to prepare for the rave.
     "You can't be serious Raven!" cried Chris. Raiinbow Raven just smiled and responded "what so wrong with the idea?". If you didn't know already (but you probably did) Raven is a scientist, she specialized in transformations. Chris on the other hand was one of her victims. "Y-you're still recovering! You can't go to a rave, you need to pace yourself for a while!" stammered Chris. Raven had just gotten out of a coma recently (thanks to he help of a certain wolf) and she was supposed to only be active for a little bit a day. "Don't worry Chris, I won't do anything to dramatic, if I start feeling dizzy I'll sit down for a bit then head back to the lab, I promise." said Raven, still wearing that smile. Chris was suspicious, yet he didn't have much say in the matter, it's best to no mess with mad scientists when they want something. "Fine..." said Chris with a sigh "but please be careful, and no funny business!" Raiinbow laughed "alright, alright!" and with that she headed out the door, making sure Chris didn't see her slip something into her pocket.
     When Felicia and Jane got to the club it was 10 and the rave had just begun. Jane, who was was feeling much more extroverted than usual, was shaking with anticipation. "Come on! Let's get in there!" cried Felicia, almost dragging her friend after her. They had no trouble getting in, they were actually friends with the bouncer on duty, and they we're instantly dancing. The D.J was very energetic that night, dancing along with the people there. It was a very large club, so naturally the turn out was massive. There were lasers and fog machines, the whole room covered in the synthetic mist. Everybody was so preoccupied with dancing, nobody noticed  brunette in a lab coat slip into the midst of the party.
     Jane was having the time of her life, dancing wildly with Felicia. She was going to try and talk to her friend, yet the music was so loud she would have just been drowned out. Jane looked around to see if any of her other friends had come too, but she honestly couldn't tell with over half of the people clad in strange outfits and costumes. There was one person that Jane thought was out of place, this woman dressed in what looked like a lab coat. This strange girl looked a little pale and she had a little wobble in her step. Jane intended to go and ask her if she was alright, but she lost sight of her in the massive crowd, so she just went back to dancing.
     Raven frowned at the sight of the rave. She had expected so much more from "the biggest rave ever". She tried to find something fun about the party, yet nothing came to mind. Yet Raven had planned for this, she had brought with her an experimental anthro syrem, to help spice up the rave. Determined, Raiinbow walked towards the massive fog machine and gingerly poured the whole mixture into it. With that Raven walked towards the back of the club where the fog didn't reach and she proceeded to watch the "show".  
     Felicia, Jane, and the rest of the people at the rave soon began to feel lightheaded, a feeling that was steadily increasing. The partygoers began to feel dizzy and their heads throbbed. After a few minutes of minor chaos among the people, changes began.
     Jane noticed white hairs begin to protrude from her skin. The hairs were multiplying quickly forming a coat of fur. There were also several patches of black fur as well. Her shoes suddenly grew tighter and tighter until the seams popped wide open, revealing large paws, just forming pads. Jane was in awe of her sudden changes, but she wasn't afraid, she was filled with adrenaline from these changes. Her hair turned white, matching the fur to a tee. Her jeans slipped slightly down to make room for her new tail, it wagged behind her excitedly. Her ears grew longer, slightly flopping over as they moved towards the top of her head. Her nose suddenly grew darker and moist, causing her to sneeze. Her face elongated into a muzzle and with that Jane's changes ended, where she once stood was now an anthro Dalmatian.
     Felicia also became effected by the fog, her change however was different. She first noticed several orange hairs on her arms. The curious girl scratched them, finding a purring noise escape from her. Felicia screamed at hearing the purr, and at the fact the orange hair was rapidly covering her. She felt a thin orange tail escape from behind her, it swayed slightly back and forth. Her toes fused a bit, making feline paws where her feet once were. Felicia grew thinner and shorter, her shirt now a size or two bigger than what would fit her. Whiskers protruded from her face as her nose turned pink and slightly scrunched up. Her ears morphed into triangles as the fur reached her face finishing her transformation.
     Everyone had changed into an anthro animal, except Raven. The D.J was now a very confused dog, he had instantly turned off the music.    Raiinbow stifled a laugh, but seeing that if they saw she was still human they'd be pretty pissed, so she slipped out the back door. Jane along with half of the people at the rave, were pumped about there new forms, where Felicia and the other half were stunned and upset. "Oh don't get yourself down..." Said Jane to Felicia, "you look great, and I think some guys were checking you out!" Felicia giggled, "alright, I'll give this a chance...". Jane laughed "that was way easier than I thought it would be! Oh and is it just me or is that D.J cute..."
     Raven got back to her lab fifteen minutes later. "So, how as the rave?" asked Chris with a coy smile on his face. Raiinbow shrugged "meh, it was boring, it would have been more fun hanging out here...". Chris decided to just be blunt with his approaching her as he said "oh? That weird the news said some unidentified person turned everyone at the rave into an anthropodromorph...". Raven sighed and laughed "okay, guilty as charged!" 
     Nobody ever I.D'd the person who caused the transformation. Felicia and Jane remain roommates, and both grew to love their new bodies. Jane and the D.J started dating, they really hit it off together. The club where the rave took place was closed in case of left over fumes. In the end most of the partygoers grew to accept their new bodies. One thing was for sure: that was a night to remember.
A request for :iconraiinbowraven: based on her newest submissions. 
I know she said it's okay if it's low priority but I was SO inspired to write this, it was really fun to do! 
Also sorry I named the characters myself, I honestly didn't see a name for them I the pictures...
So what do you think?
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